Song feedback

Before you submit your song read these instructions

Have an online link to your song ready to insert into this document e.g. Soundcloud
Go through the checklist thoroughly to make sure the song is the very best it can be
If you know something could be better, revisit your song before you submit

Your Information
Name*
First Last
Email*
Phone*
Song Information
Song title*
All writers and splits*
e.g. Tom Smith 33%, Dick Smith 33%. Harry Smith 33%
Link to your song*

Soundcloud or similar
Reference: Which artist(s) or sound do you hear for this song*
Let the mentor know how you envisage the final produced song e.g. EDM, folk, Katy Perry, Charlie Puth, Michael Bublé etc.
Structure
How long is your song*
Tip: Try keeping your song 3m or under, with a maximum of 3m 30s
When is your first chorus?*
Tip: Try bringing in your first chorus at 45s or less, with a maximum of 1m
How many different parts does your song have e.g. My song has 3 sections: verse, pre and chorus*
Having just 3 different parts works brilliantly because it's simple, 4 is ok if you really need to, but 5 and above is nearly always a no-no!
Is there strong contrast between the parts of your song?*
Contrast is everything in songwriting. If your song sounds liner or 'same' you will lose the listeners very quickly.
Music
Do you change the melodic form between the parts of your song?*
This can help create strong contrast so double check, and if you don't change form, try a re-write of your melodies!
Where do you use static, conjunct and disjunct melodies?*
Do you have an exciting melodic contour in your song?*
Melodic contour is the pitch of the notes. Higher notes in the chorus and lower notes in the verses help take the listeners on a musical rollercoaster!
Does you melody rise and peak in the chorus*
This helps create a 'moment' for your chorus although sometimes it can cool to do the opposite and have a massive dip in the chorus melody.
Where are your hooks? What is your strongest hook and where does it live?*
Hooks are essential if you want the listeners to remember your song. Make sure they are repeated!
What is the vocal range of your song?*
If you're pitching songs to other artists, it's a good rule of thumb to write within a range of 1.5 octaves to keep your opportunities broad.
Do you use any 'surprise' chords in your song? Please give details.*
A surprise chord can help suddenly grab the listeners attention, so it's great of you want to pull them in with a surprise chord in order to deliver your killer lyric.
Lyrics
What is the point of your song?*
Crystallise the song down so you know what the listener is going to walk away with as a message or thought. One succinct point is all you need.
Which pronouns do you use most in your song?*
You and I are the strongest pronouns as they create a connection between the performer and the audience. If your song is third person she/he, have you tried turning it into you/I?
Do you have a stand out lyric within the first two lines of your song?*
This is overlooked as a really effective way to get the listener 'on your side' from the very beginning of your song.
Do you have 'conflict' in your song? If so give details.*
Conflict is where lyrics oppose each other and therefore create more impact for the listener without them even being aware of it.
Do you use any internal rhymes in your song. Give details.*
If you can't find any, have a close look at your lyric and see if a re-write could add some.
Does your chorus make sense if that's all the listener heard?*
Sometimes people only tune in to the chorus when they're listening 'passively' without intention. IF that's all they hear, make sure they 'get' your song enough to want to listen to the rest of it!
Is your lyric easy to understand?*
Simple and understandable lyrics don't mean you're dumbing anything down, it means your song is accessible!
Is your lyric easily singable?*
If you , or whoever is singing the song struggles to get the words out, re-write!
The Feels
What do you hope the listeners will feel?*
Think about the feelings of the listener when you write, not just how you feel. At the same time, make sure the song comes from a real place in you.
What do you love about your song?*
You'd better LOVE this song or you need to re-write it until you do!
How do you think your song could be improved?*
Be honest with yourself and the mentor. That's how you will improve as a writer.
Are there any 'red flags' in your song?*
Check for those niggly moments when you wonder if a section of melody or lyric could be just a tad better...
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